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Thursday, July 9, 2009

ALA

Tomorrow morning I leave for Chicago for the ALA Conference. I will have my computer with me, but will have little time for emailing and stuff. I will be slow to reply and might not get back to anyone's comments or emails until mid-to-late next week.

The first Ink Notes writing exercise is available here. Everyone is welcome to leave an entry there. I promise I will read them all when I get back.

See you all next week!

Tuesday, July 7, 2009

Ink Notes #1: The Violinist

This is my interpretation for Ink Notes #1 (based on La Serenissima). Be warned ahead of time: It is raw, unedited, and not in polished state at all.

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The Violinist

Dad was driving me to the dentist. I had offered to drive myself, but he still didn't trust me after last year's accident, so I was stuck in the passenger seat of our red Metro hatchback, bouncing with each bump on the road. Dad had the radio turned to the afternoon's symphony performance, and I knew better than to say a word while he listened. I stared out the window as old trees flashed by, hiding prosperous houses from the crumbling sidewalk, creating a barrier between the roughness outside and the tranquility within.

Our car bumped along with the song's rhythm - one, two, one, two - and I smiled at the impromptu choreography. We slowed behind a long line of cars at the light, and stopped, again on the beat. I smiled and watched.

The wind blew as the music swelled, and ruffled the barrier of trees at my right. The cars on the cross street passed in measured jumps - one, two, one, two. A jogger turned onto the sidewalk and plodded toward us at the perfect tempo. As he passed our Metro, a plastic grocery bag raced across the street and lifted upwards on the breeze until it toppled with the music into one of those immaculate yards.

The light turned green and the cars ahead of us moved forward. Their taillights flickered off one by one in a slow ripple until we could go again. We inched ahead, but not fast enough to make the light.

"Damn!" Dad muttered, and he hit the steering wheel as we slammed on the brakes - off-rhythm - for the red light. The pattern broke. We were now first in line.

A small music store stood at the intersection. Its door opened while we waited and a young man walked out. He was dressed in a grey, hooded jacket zipped up against the early-spring cold, and he looked down at the parking lot as he approached the bus stop's bench. When he sat, a mere ten feet from me, he looked up and caught my eye. I quickly stifled any noise surprise tried to force out of me.

I knew him! Rory Hays. I'd seen him only last night, at my sister's recital. He performed two songs before her. When he'd walked onto the stage, wearing that same grey jacked over faded jeans, Dad had snorted and I'd had to suppress a giggle. His ratty clothes and spiked black hair contrasted so badly with the sea of suits and dresses, with the shine of gel and spray, that he looked alien next to us all.

"What does he think this is?" Dad whispered to no one in particular. "A rock concert?"

Others in the room were muttering softly as well, but Rory Hays took no notice. He lifted his violin to his chin and began to play. Within seconds, I was transported. Who cared what he looked like, when his music was so otherworldly? He closed his eyes as he played, caressed the instrument as he might a lover. By the time he finished, mine weren't the only tears in the room.

I'd looked for him in the reception hall after the recital, but no one had seen him. No one knew who he was. He almost could have been a dream, a figment of my imagination. Disappointed, I fell asleep that night with his notes in my head.

And now, here he was, staring at me from the bus stop's bench, while Dad drummed his fingers on the wheel in time with the symphony.

I leaned against the cold window and stared at him, and he stared back at me. It was a connection I never wanted to end. My hand reached up and touched the glass, an involuntary display of longing. He moved forward on his seat. My lips tingled, parted slightly, and I imagined his lips on mine, lightly, gently, sharing that beautiful, note-driven soul with me by his touch.

His mouth curled on one side into a melancholy smile, and he looked away. The light changed, and we drove on.

Monday, July 6, 2009

Ink Notes #1


Okay, it seems a handful of people are interested in the music-writing exercise group I posted about yesterday. We might as well give it a try, then, and see how much participation we get. Below is La Serenissima, as performed by Loreena McKennitt. I figured we should start with something without lyrics. Try not to watch the video itself, but to just listen to the music to get inspiration for your writing. Any sort of writing is acceptable: story, slice of life, journal, nonfiction, poetry, etc.



For our first trial, I will keep this as our song for 2 weeks. Eventually, I plan to do this on a weekly basis, unless everyone prefers it bi-weekly. I've posted a Mr. Linky below. You can put your name, blog name, or writing piece name in the Name section, and the direct URL to your post in the URL section (please don't link to your blog's general address). No need to hurry. You can post your entry at any time.

If anyone has any suggestions for music choices, please let me know in the comments. Jason and I have several months worth of songs picked out, but of course we are limited in what we know and would like to have a round selection. The music has to be available online (YouTube, Myspace page, etc) so that I can link to it here. Also, please make sure it's a selection everyone can use (i.e. no hardcore vulgarity etc and no overtly religious choices). Lastly, you want to avoid any music that tells an easily-understood story already, as that will make it difficult to come up with our own ideas.

Good luck, happy writing, and make sure and tell as many writers as you can about this project!!



**Note: I plan to update the above picture with the Ink Notes title and make a little button for our group. As soon as that's done, I'll update the picture on this post.

Sunday, July 5, 2009

Calling All Writers...

The other day, I had to write a mini-story based on a song for one of my reading challenges (my post is here). More than one person wondered about doing something like this on a regular basis. Now, I wouldn't want to do that alone. I wouldn't want to just post something every week for people to see. However, Jason thought of the great idea of making this a weekly event, posting up a song or piece of music and letting people use it as inspiration. To use music as a type of writing prompt (I admit - I hate real writing prompts and personally find them useless; music is much better). Once a person has written whatever the music inspires (story, nonfiction, journal, poetry, whatever), they can link back to their post - I'd put up a Mr. Linky - and that way we can get a community of writers together to support and help each other. Like on online writer's circle.

Would anyone be interested in doing something like this? I would only want to do it if there was enough interest.

If you're interested, please pass the word out, so we can try to spread this to as many budding writers as possible. Have people come back to comment on this post.

I was thinking I could possibly post a new song every Monday, and people could come back and link to their writing all throughout the week. If you have any ideas to add, I'd love to hear them!

Saturday, July 4, 2009

Happy 4th!

To make you smile, here's a cool video of my kids performing a song they wrote themselves. Ambrose wrote the lyrics and melody, and he sings. Morrigan dresses as Abe Lincoln and plays the guitar. Laurence dresses as Teddy Roosevelt (at least, he claims to) and plays percussion. While they didn't technically create this for the 4th, yesterday's performance was really just perfect timing.

"All the Presidents"

Wednesday, July 1, 2009

June Goals Update

1) Goal: to write 10,000 words per month.

2) Goal: to read 100 books and complete my reading challenges - DONE!!!

As of June 30th, I've read 101 books for the year. Book reviews and other bookish stuff available at The Zen Leaf. I'm crossing this one out as done.

3) Goal: to be able to jog for 5 miles.

4) Goal: to read the Bible.

5) Goal: to get back into school in the fall - DONE!!!

I'm signed up for classics, got my financial aid together, and am set to go late August. I'm crossing this out as done.

6) Goal: to not cut my hair.

Broke down a couple weeks ago and cut it. Oh well. It's a record-breaking summer and temps have been over 100 for 3 weeks nonstop now. You can't even go outside in the morning because it's already over 80 and humid. The boys go outside to play and are red and sweaty within half an hour. So I'm scratching this one out.

This will be my last goal update. I gave up on goals 1, 3, 4, and 6, while I completed goals 2 and 5. Not a great year, but that's okay.

Tuesday, June 30, 2009

I hate credit card companies.

Today's mini-rant: Credit card companies should not be able to change your rates just because their business practices change. They sign a contract with you. They shouldn't be able to change that contract. The fact that they're allowed to put in a clause of "we can change this without warning whenever we want to" should be illegal.

Jason and I only own one credit card. Other than some "Oh, I forgot my debit card today" charges that get paid off within a few days, we haven't had any debt on that card for going on three years now. We have the card solely in case of emergency, or for "I forgot my debit card" days.

Yesterday, we got a change of rate notice in the mail. Bank of America's business practices are changing, and therefore everyone with a fixed rate (like us) will suddenly have a variable rate. But oh don't worry, it's still the same rate!!

Excuse me? Don't worry? Do you really think I want a variable rate equal to my fixed rate when we're at the lowest point in the economy and that rate will only go up as the economy recovers? No.

So Jason called the company this morning. We could just cancel our card. However, we've had this card now for nearly a decade, through many changes in ownership, so we thought we'd give them a chance. The last time they tried to screw us over was in early 2006, so we immediately paid off the small debt we had on there and called to cancel the card. They begged us to stay, and offered a fixed rate under 10%, so we allowed that. It's been the same for more than three years now. When Jason called this morning, he told them that we either needed to switch back to a fixed rate, or we were going to find a new credit card and call back to cancel. After the operator spent some time trying to convince Jason first that nothing was changing (do we sound that stupid?), and second to upgrade to a card that will have the same variable APR but will give us points (whoopee?), we let them know we'd go find another card and call back later to cancel. Within a few weeks, we'll be calling them back.

Who wants to bet they'll beg to keep us around, and offer us a fixed rate as an incentive?

And who wants to bet we'll say, "No thanks. We already offered you that chance."

I hate credit card companies. Rant over.

Saturday, June 27, 2009

progress

Synopsis is done.

Now moving on to Author Bio. Need to have it all ready to ship out Monday morning. My cousin gave me some great ideas/info about author bios. Thanks, Jen.

On a more humorous note, I want to relate a fun accidental conversation Jason and I had tonight. The commercials came on during the news, and neither of us were watching them. A Church's Chicken commercial came on, one of those rap ones that say, "I know what good is." Warning, a little religious humor ahead. We didn't mean anything offensive by it, I promise.

Me (snarky, only half paying attention while I worked on my writing): They know what good is.
Jason (snarky, also only half paying attention): Yeah - Good is following Jesus.
Me (snarky, still not paying attention): To Church's?

Only then, once I'd said it, did I realize my accidental pun. We laughed for five minutes. I had to share.

Other good news - I wrote today! Not much, like 650 words, and towards a new project that'll likely end up being a long short story, but either way, I wrote! That's the most non-synopsis, non-blog writing I've done in three months. Yay!!

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I didn't want to put a whole new post for this, so I'm just adding on the 28th that I finished my author bio also and have everything read to send off to the agent with tomorrow's mail. Yay!

Thursday, June 25, 2009

more good news

Wow. I'd gotten back most my rejections from the last round of agents, and just now got a message from an agent requesting the first three chapters, a synopsis, and an author bio. By mail instead of email. Wow, I'm so excited. I know this doesn't mean anything yet, but at least someone wants to look at it!!!!! On top of all the bad stuff, this is wonderful news.

good news, bad news

Does that remind you of Good Idea, Bad Idea from Animaniacs? My favorite was "whistling while you work/eat."

Anyway.

Good news: Lab results from the surgery came back. The cysts were benign. Also, surgery site seems to be healing well.

Bad news: I caught a stomach flu yesterday and spent 24 hours hopping in and out of the bathroom. Thankfully, I'm feeling a little better now (better enough to sit at my computer and post this), but I was still unhappy about it. You'd think, with all the medications I'm on post-surgery, I wouldn't have this problem...

Jason says I have the weakest immune system of anyone he's ever met. It's probably true, and that irritates me. I almost never got sick before my 2nd year in college. That's when I had a crown put on a front tooth, which caused an absess under my jaw that no one found for 6 years. I started getting sick every few weeks. Add that to three pregnancies in 3.5 years, and you have the perfect recipe for a completely shot immune system. It's now been 5 years since my last pregnancy and 4 years since my tooth was fixed, and yet, I still have the worst immune system ever. Really annoying. I'd like to go back to the days when I never got sick.